|Reviews for Your|
| 10251294129570128321 chapter 1 . 6/20/2006
omg i haven't reviewed you for like... a year. and i don't know if i've read this before or not, but i LOVE it! your writing is absolutely fabulous, except the bold letters burn my eyes. o.0
"You try to cry but your eyes seem to be sewn shut"
I think that's too wordy, maybe you could find a way to make it say the same thing but with less words. chyeah.