Reviews for Capture
KingdomRain chapter 1 . 4/24/2006
i think i liked this one the best because of the wording that you used. (lucky bird)
Raspberry Twirl chapter 1 . 2/19/2006
wonderful image. great middle lines, too. what exactly is a pseudo bird? i've never heard of it before!
With Rhyme and Reason chapter 1 . 11/17/2005
I don't like to say anything about typing errors, because God knows my work is full of them. But in your second to last line, you say this: "It is noting, yet it is everywhere." Before I realizes that you probably meant "nothing," I couldn't figure out the meaning of the poem. Other than that, even though there's no real structure, I liked this poem-especially the middle part; it was so simple but very, very meaningful as well: "Dying / Twisting / Crying." A poem of few words, but great emotion.