Reviews for Barren
KingdomRain chapter 1 . 4/24/2006
i really liked the poem (but in the 5th line is are Supposed to be our?)just asking. other than that i liked it. its got felling in it.
Raspberry Twirl chapter 1 . 3/4/2006
strong, unique, and a little depressing! altogether, nice job. thanks for posting!

lots of smiles, raspberry twirl!

p.s. thank you for your reviews!