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With Rhyme and Reason chapter 1 . 11/16/2005
Hmm... very deep. This confuses me, but that's probably because I'm not in my "analytical phase" (I have to save that for this afternoon's English class). I like your inconsistent rhyming, and I usually don't say that. Your colloquial language adds to the poem, instead of taking away from it (i.e., "But as you said you screwed me up bad"), and I don't usually say that, either. So what, you might ask, the heck am I trying to say? Answer: You're doing things that annoy me, but they WORK FOR THIS POEM. I like it. Nice job.