| Reviews for Trouble |
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   Caroline000 chapter 1 . 1/18/2006 great poem I liked it keep writing. |
| from beneath the bell jar chapter 1 . 1/12/2006 WOW! I've never read anything like this before. The confusion just...and god there are some beautiful lines! "Trouble never looks at you except when you're not there" and "And Trouble rarely tells the truth unless he's telling lies" and I think this is my fav: "And trouble doesn't chase you but he'll catch you all the same" Amazing! Beautiful flow AND rhyme...gorgeous. |
| Aslan Israel chapter 1 . 11/16/2005 That was BRILLIANT! Really is your best, and I mean it. Everything fit together so perfectly without overdoing it, ah! Just great to read. Brava! |
| Maxwell Brine chapter 1 . 11/9/2005 Great poem! It flows and rhymes really well. Keep Writing. |