Reviews for Goat Man: Lord of the Capricorn
infernal n1ght stepper chapter 1 . 8/30/2009
for the limited amount of info, I think you did pretty well, as it describes me spot-on XD

I also liked how you rhymed it; it flows nicely!

ins
Fireeye Howlsong Rainpelt chapter 1 . 1/17/2006
Yes, I like the rhymes. A few times the whole thing changed direction where it could have been lengthened and then changed so the flow wasn't so dis-jointed, but I can understand how that works when you're actually writing it. It just feels so good as you're doing it. I really like it. Overall, it's great; it gets the point across, unlike some where the point is at the very end while the rest is really just a fill-in.

Good job!

P.S. Thanks for reviewing "Let Me Be." I'm really proud of that one and wanted some input from others. I'm glad you like it!
Aimee Raven chapter 1 . 11/25/2005
Ah I'm really awful, I'm so sorry, I never have time to review! :(...sorry! You know, I don't believe in the zodiac, for me it's a bunch of nonsense, but these poems of yours are really good! This one reminds me of a mother-goose rhyme or something, because it rhymes and the shorts lines...good job :). Love, Mia
Justin chapter 1 . 11/15/2005
hey hon, it was not THAT good... HAHAHA who am I trying to kid? You did it again, I love your writing. I only wish that i could right atleast half as good as you do, atleast then I wouldnt seem like I am retarded when I write. I think you have outgrown this website, you have done such spectacular work I think you should take your writing skills to the next level and write an entire book of poems, a compilation of sorts. It should only be a matter of time before people fall to their knees and beg you to write for them (publishers I meant, well me to hehe).I love when you write it makes me happy to see that, even with your busy schedule, you still have time to do what you like to do.

I Love you beyond the boundries of the human heart.

Love forever and for always your loving husband

_-Justin-_

PS I mean it... hehehe *smooch*
CeeDeeJay chapter 1 . 11/10/2005
hehe Love it and i must say that is so me...Ok maybe not. most call me evil and coniving JK well I liked how you rhymed. It went reather well. Thanks for the feed back and all Love you always and forever Dee