Reviews for ThunderStorm
name redacted chapter 1 . 3/17/2010
I like the images and the sporatic rhymes. Just a suggestion: the last line seems a syllable or two short. Otherwise, good flow.
Teperehmi chapter 1 . 11/10/2005
I really liked it. THe imagery was great and was slightly humorous at the end. Nice work.
Smoky Bear chapter 1 . 11/10/2005
cool, you're nailing this more and more. i love thunderstorms... love the drama... love this poem.

it's great how you're reeling these off. keep it up.