Reviews for Fire
An Inside Joke chapter 1 . 11/13/2005
Good start, but the last line was a bit redundant.
Zefskiy chapter 1 . 11/10/2005
I like it, except for the fact that you used the word 'inside' twice.
Smoky Bear chapter 1 . 11/10/2005
like writing! very nice, well done
Surfing Dog chapter 1 . 11/10/2005
Very true. Keep this up:o)
sunday night sky chapter 1 . 11/10/2005
nice work :) keep writing