|Reviews for Sun|
| Pheobe Meryll chapter 1 . 11/18/2005
short and sweet. I liked it, though it wasn't the most mermorable thing I've ever read.
| An Inside Joke chapter 1 . 11/13/2005
I've got to be honest- I'm not a huge fan of Haikus. It seems like it would be so hard to say much of anything in so few syllables. This is a nice enough poem, I guess, but maybe you could have put more meaning behind it.
| Smoky Bear chapter 1 . 11/10/2005
i really like this one, the eye-rhymes echo and have a nice resonance.
| Surfing Dog chapter 1 . 11/10/2005
Well thats what the sun really is;o)