|Reviews for Making Him Notice|
| Brown-Eyed Chocoholic chapter 6 . 3/30/2011
Ashlyn is definitely interesting. There's something unsettling about her, though.
Damn, making out in an empty room? :D HAHA, FUN. I love how Trent is so concerned.
I'm wondering about Trent's family. They seem to have problems. Hm...
Delia's rooting for 'em. Woot, woot! :)
| Brown-Eyed Chocoholic chapter 5 . 3/30/2011
Aww, Ryan is adorable.
Veronica, burn, bitch.
I lalala-love this chapter! Trent was jealous about Ryan. :D Aha! And Mitchell is actually a player. Interesting. So he must not be that interested in Lsila. Which is, y'know, a relief. x)
| Brown-Eyed Chocoholic chapter 4 . 3/30/2011
I giggled. How embarrassing. I'm in my parents' room, borrowing my mom's laptop. :P Gah...
Anyway, I knew that they'd meet again. Trent seems to be very interested in Laila. Mitchel, too. I smell a love triangle comin' up. Mwahaha! 8D
| Brown-Eyed Chocoholic chapter 3 . 3/30/2011
I love these kinds of stories. Delia is charming; Trent is cute; Laila is that nice girl.
That girl with the UGGs is pathetic. I'm going to be a freshi next SY, but I will definitely have more class than her. :P Just saying.
| Brown-Eyed Chocoholic chapter 2 . 3/30/2011
Una. Cool name, BTW. It means first in Filipino. :)
I wonder where Trent was watching her. He's interested in her already. Woot!
This story reminds me so much of my favorite stories. It's like a mix of everything. :D
I am so glad that I found this on ADoR.
| Brown-Eyed Chocoholic chapter 1 . 3/30/2011
I knew right away that Delia was Trent's li'l sister. :D These things happened a lot on FP stories.
Anyway, I like the story so far. Mitchell seems like a great guy. Too bad that he'll probably get his heart broken.
| MuffinsRoxSox chapter 25 . 3/30/2011
That is so...heartbreaking. I really shouldn't have read this before school. Don't want to go in with red eyes now... Overall, this story was awesome. :) I thought it was great. Well, got to go. Amazing job. :)
| MissCiya chapter 25 . 3/28/2011
| Ms Violet chapter 26 . 3/22/2011
I love your story, thank you so much for writting it. The ending made me cry a but :)
Can't wait to read the sequel
| Kelly Rogala chapter 25 . 2/22/2011
Just wanted to say thanks! Thanks for making me cry what the heck! Great story either way and when I finished reading this I was super happy that the sequel was already up because that would of sucked if I had to wait :) I'm not a very patient person lol. Great job again!
| callmecoolene chapter 25 . 2/16/2011
I feel empty and alone. It's been a while that a story on here has made me fall in love and cry. Thanks for doing that :')
| cosmetgirl chapter 4 . 2/5/2011
| jorie chapter 25 . 1/8/2011
i love this fic..
the characters were all lovable...
except for shane though..
trent andd laila are adorable..
i love their story...
it was sad what happened to una.. but i see that it was necessary in the next chapters ahead..
i kinda had the feeling she'd be gone coz of what she made laila promise to do..
but it was still sad..
i enjoyed this wonderful fic!
off to go read the sequel )
| HookedonFic2 chapter 5 . 1/5/2011
I really like Ryan, he seems such a nice friend! :-))
| HookedonFic2 chapter 2 . 1/5/2011
Good story! :-)