Reviews for Making Him Notice |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Sweet date, and Trent acted just like her answer in the quiz...a kiss on the cheek and a walk in the woods. So Una seemed ok...is she really. Will Trent ever tell Laila his problems? Enjoying. |
![]() ![]() ![]() So does Laila get her 10 questions? Oh and Ashlyn seems nice...Ally not so much. Everyone seems pretty excited that Trent is going on a date! Some of those girls are kind of mean to Laila. Enjoying. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I wonder what the talk between Trent and Mitchell was about. Trent didn't seem very happy. Oh Yay! They are going on a date! Enjoying. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I do like Ryan...and I wonder why he stopped hanging out with the girls...oh and I think Trent is totally interested. Enjoying. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I thought that Trent might be there. Oh and it's snowing will he be helping Laila home? Enjoying. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Shane sounds like a dirt bag. Laila and Delia...looks like fate may be playing a hand in her life! Enjoying. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Enjoyed this first chapter. I liked the way you portrayed Laila. I liked her friendship with Dani, her crush on Trent, all the volunteer work she does. Sweet and unassuming. Can't wait to see what happens. Enjoying. |
![]() ![]() ![]() this story is seriously one of my all time favorites... i loved every single chapter, sentence, and word i cant wait to start reading the sequel |
![]() ![]() Hello, there. It's Juliet from A Drop of Romeo and your story has been nominated and added to the site. Congratulations. :D Here's your raving review: This is a SkoW-nominated (Best Make-Out Scene and Best Cliche), 1o reviewed story. In other words, it's good and definitely worth reading. It's adorable and well-written. The unpopular girl falls for the hottie. The last chapter? Yeah, it makes you cry. Amazing. XOXO, Juliet |
![]() ![]() ![]() I Kinda Read This In The Wrong Order D; But Either Way You Have Some Awesome Stories :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Omg. You're such a talented writer. I'm so in love with this story I don't even know what to say! You made me even cry I just LOVE Trent and Laila. Can't wait to read the sequel now. In fact, i'm going to do that right after this review. x |
![]() ![]() ![]() omygod ohmygod ohmygod. i absolutely love this story so much! i cried at the end,- i have read this story soo much times yet i never get bored of it because its just amazing. i lovelovelove the plot and i lovelovelove trent and laila. i wish i had a trant in my life! its not fair! :( lmao, you are such a brilliant and talented writer and you amaze me. i love your storiess! the sequel to this story is really good aswell, its such an interesting plot aswell- not one you read about everday! i just think that your an amazing writer and just felt the need to tell you. :) -ilovepunks. x |
![]() ![]() Ok, so I know this story was written a while ago and I didn't read all of it but I would just like to point out that I used to have a yorkshire terrier named Skipper and I think that's pretty cool. |
![]() ![]() :O its not fair how good of a writer you are. i lovelovelove this story. reading it for the gazzilionth time. favourite story much? wel donee! x |
![]() ![]() I just had to write this. I see it all of the time! Seriously, I think I've seen more stories with this mistake than the people that get it right. Isle is an island, like a name for one or just a regular one. Aisle is the one that is in a grocery store. |