Reviews for Making Him Notice
esha khan chapter 1 . 4/25/2015
your story is great and ive only just started it
EireGal chapter 1 . 4/9/2015
I can read no more. "I notice first that he has a disease that makes him mentally retarded". That is such a messed up statement it is off the wall. WTF. What disease is this, that u have made up in your head, is it contagious?. People are not mentally retarded, it is such a derogatory term. Also your character can tell a persons intellect by looking...I think not. Im going to assume you are a very young teenager writing this story, but please remember words have power.
tahira chapter 27 . 9/14/2014
One thing. I love you and this story. I was so freaking bored and you made my day! This was amazing. I'm posting as a guest but my account is by the name of Tahira.j12 and seeing how good you are could you read and review my story Run After You? If you did I'd be honoured. Once again this was above great
leavesfallingup chapter 13 . 6/20/2014
There is no problem with Delia's speech or her obvious maturity and intelligence. If parents read to their children and talk to their children in a mature way, the children often reflect this. In this case, since the parents seem to be non-involved (at least with Trent), the "reading to her" seems dubious, but perhaps Trent is the one who treats her well.

It is sad about Una, though her story is unfortunately more common than any of us like to believe. I have never understood women who stay with a man who abuses them... nor can I understand a man who takes pleasure in hurting women (or children).
ab2heaven chapter 25 . 5/25/2014 gona strike crying!
ab2heaven chapter 22 . 5/25/2014
u cant kill una! noooooo
ab2heaven chapter 9 . 5/22/2014
he kissed her on the cheeks...soo gentlemanly...cute!
ab2heaven chapter 8 . 5/22/2014
ab2heaven chapter 7 . 5/22/2014
awww its too cute!
ab2heaven chapter 3 . 5/22/2014
its cuteii!
ab2heaven chapter 1 . 5/22/2014
its nice!
solarisacorn chapter 3 . 2/10/2014
This is so adorable! I luv it! Yay!
SeriousAliysa chapter 26 . 12/4/2013
One of my favourites stories on here just reread it and have reviewed before bit cannot remembed what i say and a perfect song for the ending would be u.n.i by ed sheeran btw
AliCat chapter 7 . 11/18/2013
AliCat chapter 5 . 11/18/2013
Ryan's description of the slut was so funny ROFL!
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