Reviews for Making Him Notice
leavesfallingup chapter 13 . 6/20/2014
There is no problem with Delia's speech or her obvious maturity and intelligence. If parents read to their children and talk to their children in a mature way, the children often reflect this. In this case, since the parents seem to be non-involved (at least with Trent), the "reading to her" seems dubious, but perhaps Trent is the one who treats her well.

It is sad about Una, though her story is unfortunately more common than any of us like to believe. I have never understood women who stay with a man who abuses them... nor can I understand a man who takes pleasure in hurting women (or children).
engraved7 chapter 25 . 5/25/2014
oh...god..im gona cry..no strike tht..im crying!
engraved7 chapter 22 . 5/25/2014
u cant kill una! noooooo
engraved7 chapter 9 . 5/22/2014
he kissed her on the cheeks...soo gentlemanly...cute!
engraved7 chapter 8 . 5/22/2014
classic!
engraved7 chapter 7 . 5/22/2014
awww its too cute!
engraved7 chapter 3 . 5/22/2014
its cuteii!
engraved7 chapter 1 . 5/22/2014
its nice!
solarisacorn chapter 3 . 2/10/2014
This is so adorable! I luv it! Yay!
SeriousAliysa chapter 26 . 12/4/2013
One of my favourites stories on here just reread it and have reviewed before bit cannot remembed what i say and a perfect song for the ending would be u.n.i by ed sheeran btw
AliCat chapter 7 . 11/18/2013
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAH TRAILA HAPPENED ASDFGHJKL YAYAYAYAYAY! Thank u sooo much aaah xxx
AliCat chapter 5 . 11/18/2013
Ryan's description of the slut was so funny ROFL!
AliCat chapter 2 . 11/18/2013
Yes I officially love it 3 xxx
AliCat chapter 1 . 11/18/2013
Yep, the upperclassmen sound like some peeps I know. But OMG I already love Trent and Laila I SHIP TRAILA! Great story so far tho, 3 it xx!
Guest chapter 26 . 9/21/2013
It was very amazing love story .i dont know i am going to forget it for ages .plese comlete this story.
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