Reviews for Making Him Notice
SeriousAliysa chapter 26 . 12/4/2013
One of my favourites stories on here just reread it and have reviewed before bit cannot remembed what i say and a perfect song for the ending would be u.n.i by ed sheeran btw
AliCat chapter 7 . 11/18/2013
AliCat chapter 5 . 11/18/2013
Ryan's description of the slut was so funny ROFL!
AliCat chapter 2 . 11/18/2013
Yes I officially love it 3 xxx
AliCat chapter 1 . 11/18/2013
Yep, the upperclassmen sound like some peeps I know. But OMG I already love Trent and Laila I SHIP TRAILA! Great story so far tho, 3 it xx!
Guest chapter 26 . 9/21/2013
It was very amazing love story .i dont know i am going to forget it for ages .plese comlete this story.
Sahara chapter 9 . 9/9/2013
I really love this chapter. And I wanted to know if it was okay with you it I took a scene in this chapter. That's up to you tho.
Sahara chapter 15 . 9/5/2013
I really love this chapter and Idk if this is okay but can I use a scene for a story of mine? I hshs needed permission first. I'm totally okay if you say no. But don't worry if you do say yes I would love to give you credit!
leavesfallingup chapter 9 . 7/1/2013
Did he talk to her friends to find out her likes and dislikes or did he plan the date out all on his own?
leavesfallingup chapter 7 . 7/1/2013
Trent's home life doesn't seem too happy. Considering his little sister's attitude toward their parents, it makes me wonder what is happening. The fact that they live in the same neighborhood as the very wealthy Ryan, it suggests that his parents are the hard-driving climber types. Am I right?
leavesfallingup chapter 6 . 7/1/2013
And now the claws will start to come out. It should be interesting.
leavesfallingup chapter 5 . 7/1/2013
Well, at least that solves the problem of Mitchell. He can't be too interested if he's dating someone else. Then again, it is high school.
leavesfallingup chapter 3 . 7/1/2013
Sometimes clichés are... reliable, even comfortable. After all, if something is a cliché, that implies that it happens so often that is becomes predictable, right?
leavesfallingup chapter 2 . 7/1/2013
From Delia's reaction, she doesn't seem too happy with her parents. They didn't even make it onto her "favorites" drawing. Little children are remarkably honest with their emotions, but they still tend to see their parents in the best light... which makes me wonder about the situation.

Curioser and curioser.
leavesfallingup chapter 1 . 7/1/2013
Laila seems like a very good person. Unfortunately, high schoolers aren't known to flock around "good" and "nice" students. Those qualities don't stand out as desirable until after the other types of people knock a person around for a few years.

I look forward to reading this story.
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