Reviews for Making Him Notice
Unclaimed chapter 2 . 12/7/2005
Hey I really like this chapter! I don't know normally I would say it was to slow, but it just worked and wasn't really slow at all - probably because it made progress all the same. Update soon!
RowRow34 chapter 2 . 12/5/2005
hey. short. very short. awesome. very awesome. u get my point.

jackie chapter 2 . 12/4/2005
i just found your story and its freakin awesome! keep up the good work and update soon!
Josie chapter 2 . 12/3/2005
AAw i wanna them to meet!
Raging Libra chapter 2 . 12/3/2005
i'm likin' this so far. keep those chapters comin!
euphorictragedy chapter 2 . 12/2/2005
I'm liking this story. I'm curious to see how the events unfold.
Esquirella chapter 2 . 12/2/2005
Coo set up for the third chapter.
marina eyes chapter 2 . 12/1/2005
looking forward to the next chapter - i'm guessing hazel eyes was trent?
AznCarmii chapter 2 . 12/1/2005
lol, great chappie, um, hope you update soon! : )
Kaleigh Windelynn chapter 2 . 12/1/2005
Awe. Its adorable. I like it. Please, update soon.
Cherise chapter 2 . 12/1/2005
I like it! *she stomps her foot proudly* ...couldn't really think of any criticism. No mistakes that I can see and the only thing that may be a problem is character development, but it's too early into the story to tell if that's an issue or not. Ciao, bella.
Top40princess chapter 2 . 12/1/2005
it was good. i liked it. it has this family oriented thing going on. that's cool. keep going and update soon please!
JJ chapter 2 . 12/1/2005
Aww. that was awesome...please post more soon. i cant wait to see what happens!~Jess~
the used chapter 2 . 12/1/2005
I am in love with your stories, ecpessially (sp?) this one, even though a lot is not written. I have a feeling this one is going to be my favorite. Thanks.
Sweets chapter 2 . 12/1/2005
hey! love the character! its a good dtory do far! u should hurry and finish it!
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