Reviews for Puppet Strings
frigg chapter 1 . 1/19/2006
I really like this poem, very strong metaphor. I especially like the rhyme in the first and last stanzas.

I have one critique though, the rhythm of your second stanza is all off, and choppy. I suggest shortening the lines, such as 'I'll never cry / with eyes of wood' or 'I'll always smile / a fake paint smile'. Just a suggestion.

I have to say my favorite part was the first stanza, great imagery. I don't know why I'm seeing the scene of puppets from Sound of Music, but I am.

Keep up the good work.

Cheers J
PacoTheCharm chapter 1 . 1/3/2006
So you were human once? hehi liked.
til-iburnout aka Amanda Helton chapter 1 . 12/2/2005
I like this a lot. The first stanza is my favorite. I like the fact that in the end you were free.
Rosanna28 chapter 1 . 11/28/2005
Perfect ending once again! I love this so much!

Much love, Rosanna.
I Found Myself At 24 chapter 1 . 11/12/2005
SERIOUSLY THE STORY OF MY LIFE! Kinda like the poem I wrote about strings, but much much better. Me love.
deletemyaccount2012 chapter 1 . 11/11/2005
beautiful and I enjoy the message.
bayshel-wass chapter 1 . 11/10/2005
Powerful poem, with a strong metaphor and great message! Awesome work! :D