Reviews for World of Vampires Part 3: The Empress
Just a Crazy Man chapter 10 . 4/19/2011
Just a Crazy Man chapter 1 . 4/4/2011
Love it!
soundy13 chapter 10 . 2/2/2007

i really love this story;i read part 2 also!

i think that the main idea is good but sometimes some of the ideas are a bit confusing

like u knoe in ch.5 u never said before that both jaycee and jackie were telepathic the reader had to figure that out

anyways i was just wonderin how many chapters there might be and when thte next one would be out

i can;t wait to read the next chapter

k have fun writing

(ur probabily gonna become a great author!)


Moonlight Tigress chapter 10 . 8/14/2006
wow, now this is gettin interesting! :)

whats the 'wolfs' motives?

Moonlight Tigress chapter 9 . 7/8/2006
this story is coming along very nicely... and this part was simply wonderful and motivationg...

so sweet... i love it! :)

keep it up! ;)
Moonlight Tigress chapter 8 . 3/27/2006
ooh, nice twist... such a hard decision...

you really are amazing...
One Desire chapter 7 . 3/4/2006
Sorry it took me a while to review. But I like the chapter short and sweet.
Moonlight Tigress chapter 7 . 3/1/2006
yep, i see...

and its really working... great job my friend! :)
Moonlight Tigress chapter 6 . 2/25/2006
drawing from personal experience is sometimes a really good touch to something like this... makes it all the more real...

this was a brilliant chapter, so sweet, and so sincere...

again, wonderful job and continue soon... :)
One Desire chapter 6 . 2/25/2006
Aw. That was cute.
One Desire chapter 5 . 2/23/2006
Great conflict. Keep it up!
Moonlight Tigress chapter 5 . 2/23/2006
ah... the confusion of love...

well described... and i love how they discussed the boys coming into their world... nicely done...

please continue soon! :)
One Desire chapter 4 . 2/4/2006
Curioser and it up.
Moonlight Tigress chapter 3 . 1/28/2006
thats so cool... i personaly congradulate you on having your very own book published! so exiting!

okay, anyway... im loving this, as always.. i can really feel how Jaycee feels in this... how torn she is...

cool as ever! keep up the brilliant work!
The Manifesto chapter 2 . 1/16/2006
Hey. So I'm re-reading this chapter for fun.

It's interesting. The dialogue is a bit strained...I'm not sure HOW the characters are saying WHAT their saying, so that makes their statements somewhat confusing.

The younger children are cute though, and Aaron's interaction with them is equally cute.

So yeah. When do we get to see more?
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