|Reviews for Ocean of terror|
| Oswald chapter 1 . 11/12/2005
This ocean holds not terror,person. The interaction between Elva and Morgan was not pleasing...at all. Too many moments contained frog, or spicy tea, too much lemon for my alser. Feinds will surely infest thou soul until you grovel with pain and scream with angony (not serious, but futile). Dog man needs to be entered in this story, to create this...ocean, and make it one of more terror, and not one of happiness and grandma. Fare thee well, and write on, for promise lurks in the heart of your literature.