| Reviews for Dark Lightning |
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   Jade Elf chapter 27 . 1/17/2007 Das ist ser cool! Ich habe liebe fur das buch! Ok sorry if my german is horrible I havent had it in three years. Seriously though your story is awesome. I can't wait to read more. I love how snoby your charectors are and the fact that they have flaws makes them a little easier to relate to even though they are children of gods. |
| Adiwin chapter 27 . 10/17/2006 Harpies...fun things...great descriptions of astral projection and of the feelings the castle evoked...I really felt it. |
| Casey Drake chapter 27 . 10/9/2006 ...oo... Sweet! Harpies! this is gonna be interesting... :) CD |
| Souls-and-Turkey-Cafe chapter 27 . 10/6/2006 beware the cheesy romance moments!... ahem. yeah. anyway... me must now go create story stuff involving cafes and souls and turkey sandwiches and pie... m, pie... |
| Lizard Tales jk chapter 26 . 10/5/2006 Nice, Nathan and Lana, gettin' together... 25 whole chapters, wow, that's impressive. Anyway, great story, update soon. |
| Adiwin chapter 26 . 9/24/2006 Dude! This is such a great story, it's very realisic and it's not very confusing. It's great. I was wondering if you could review my story, The Four Children of the Elements? It would be great if you could, because I have a few awkward scenes just like this one, and I need criticism to improve them. Thanks! :) |
| Casey Drake chapter 26 . 9/21/2006 GYEE! FINALLY! You know what, do you know the book Sabriel? This story reminds me of that one a little. :) CD |
| Souls-and-Turkey-Cafe chapter 26 . 9/19/2006 haha oh... ahem... yeah... i know what would make everything better! a nice big glob of stress-relieving goop... or play-doh. not sure if i spelled that right... ah well |
| Casey Drake chapter 25 . 9/10/2006 ...go sideways? Up? Down? sorry, I had to answer her question. *laughs* Gah, the circular thinking. What if they were fake then why would they talk about traps but if they were real why would they try to turn us away but then they would be fake but if they were fake... gah. I think they're gonna go on. and I think Lana is enough of a chaotic character, not to mention Nate, that between them they can change the future... heh... if Lana is the chaotic good-to-bad, and Nate is the chaotic bad-to-good, then what is Norah's purpose? I see a twist coming... And I'm gonna reread this from the beginning for the hell of it. no pun intended. :) CD |
| Adaku chapter 25 . 9/8/2006 Yeah, I'm you're 100 reviewer. *breakdances* I started school five weeks ago. Sorry for being random-it's who I am. Oh, update New Moon soon. I dying to hear what's next. Till next time adaku-chan |
| The Flyswatter chapter 24 . 9/3/2006 Hmm...How long until the next installment? ~Roc |
| Casey Drake chapter 24 . 7/20/2006 Yee! the Fates! *nodnod* i like them. cynical but not... snappy. :) CD |
| Souls-and-Turkey-Cafe chapter 24 . 7/17/2006 wow... ya know, it's kinda depressing to think that so many people think about the same naughty stuff all the time... kinda creepy too |
| The Roc-cy chapter 24 . 7/17/2006 At last, Norah gets to be unique! Good, because I was just about to start a demonstration in Antarctica protesting her sidekick-ness. :D So Lana gets to rule the world at the end? Or does Hera/I have no idea what her DL name is get to? No, I expect no answers. |
| Teh Roc-ky chapter 23 . 7/15/2006 Meep? Are you here? |