|Reviews for with LOVE|
| SeaVoi chapter 1 . 11/17/2005
This poem is confussing me, and normally I get your stuff. Well it sounds pretty, in an odd way! :)
| smile persephone chapter 1 . 11/16/2005
This is one of the most beautiful poems I've ever read .life. Lovelovelove it. "September corpse(s)" - What could be better? (Not to mention sexier?) And the ending is perfect(ion). Beautiful (&) orgasmic.
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 11/15/2005
wow... powerful and beautifully written
| Lellida chapter 1 . 11/14/2005
Whoa, really disturbing. The line about swollen lips really portrays the imagery well and adds a lot of mystery to the piece, especially with the amount of gender mentioned. (did that make sense?)
| Cloud Burst chapter 1 . 11/14/2005
almost sickening and grotesque, yet beautiful in some distorted way. am i making sense? lol. nice poem )
| Kusje chapter 1 . 11/12/2005
I like it. HEY NOELLE. ITS XANNY. Long time no.. review? ha yeah. long story long story. but your new poems are great. keep it up!
| dress her up in fairytales chapter 1 . 11/12/2005
Hm, simple and short but that's always nice. The mention of corpses sent chills down my spine. Beautiful.
| Aquafied chapter 1 . 11/12/2005
i can say,astonishly beautiful.
. , princesses, and sharpies.
| brevis chapter 1 . 11/12/2005
it was so short, and so beautiful. i just love that unfinished feel it seems to have-that probably completes it more than the words.
"& forgets him missing amongst the September corpse(s)"
| lackluster chapter 1 . 11/12/2005
4 lines and so much shock.
it does have this tendency to make me smile bitterly though. greatgreatgreat work.
| the weeping angel chapter 1 . 11/12/2005
| multiples of six chapter 1 . 11/12/2005
So emotional. Beautiful. And you & I have the same birthday. )
| breezy nostrils chapter 1 . 11/12/2005
I like how the last two lines really flowe d well. Nice work!
| account not in use chapter 1 . 11/12/2005
Oh...(in a faint, SHITFUCKSHIT voice...)
| Galadh Niniel chapter 1 . 11/12/2005
Wow. Shocking and sad, perfectly expresses the horror and tragedy of war, of losing your loved one violently, in so few words.