|Reviews for Morbid Words|
| Dracula Lord of the Vampires chapter 1 . 11/12/2005
Interesting. I like the last two lines.
| lozfairy chapter 1 . 11/12/2005
This has some really beautifully descriptive lines, I especially liked the bit about white lace and red satin. and the end is wonderful, so matter of fact, it fits perfectly. x
| swtdreamz101 chapter 1 . 11/11/2005
whoa...this is inspired...definitelyat first i thought it was just a canvas that need the artist's touchbut then...the whole corpse thing just shook me...m cooland the ending lineThe empty canvas is now splattered with blood.- creepy but good
| inxyourxeyes chapter 1 . 11/11/2005
I especially love the last line, it just hits you like a brick in the face. Great work you have here.
| sunday night sky chapter 1 . 11/11/2005
love the lines: 'Shreds of white lace,
Scattered over the body,
Glaring against the red satin...'nice work, keep it up :)