Reviews for Dialogue
swtdreamz101 chapter 1 . 11/11/2005
flower ins your pillowcase? isn't usually feathers?don't smile over "your" shoulders right?m this is a nice poem...but to be honest i kind of lost your meaning. sorry- but i kind of half understand it.
Adamn chapter 1 . 11/11/2005
Huh... this is good... the flow of the words are awesome.
Gabriel Lyman chapter 1 . 11/11/2005
wow... very well done, i love the imagery here, though you rely alot on flowered imagery... was that intentional?
SerialXLain chapter 1 . 11/11/2005
Oh wow...this is incredbile...I love how you used the same words but switched them around to give it a whole different meaning and feel to it...Great job.

Love Lain