Reviews for Another line in your book
Perfect Bliss chapter 1 . 5/10/2007
aw so lovely and sad and so very beautiful.
Janie chapter 1 . 4/4/2006
Wow.. i am in awe. seriously. this is a very touching, emotional piece that completely blew me away. dont ever stop writing ~Jani
arc arsenal chapter 1 . 1/8/2006
i agree with pinky. but i think youre smelly...
pinky chapter 1 . 11/11/2005
Wow. Wow, oh my God...I don't know if I can even describe in words how deeply this touched me. Everything about it was just so perfect...the analogies, the emotions, the grammar and spelling, everything. I've never seen a piece this emotionally raw and touching before, and I am so adding it to my favorites so I can read it again. You deserve so many review for this. We're talking thousands. I bow to your writing skills. Best I've seen on fictionpress so far. Keep it up.