Reviews for The Mirror
Lossefalmiel chapter 1 . 11/28/2005
cool! would you be willing to let me use that if I gave credit to you? it's pretty cool.
in theory chapter 1 . 11/18/2005
Pretty. Sorry it's been awhile since I waded down your neverending bio hehe. Found myself a nice little cache of unread poems *gets to work.
Squidge VR6 chapter 1 . 11/16/2005
WOW!

LOVED IT LOADS N LOADS N LOADS N LOADS!Wow.. really awesome writin!

icewolf9 (10.39)
Tori Keedah chapter 1 . 11/13/2005
Mulan is still around but she doesn't post on FP anymore.

The lot had been asking where she was too.
RoseMcCann chapter 1 . 11/13/2005
I like it. Short, sweet and to the point. What more can I say?
Lowell Boston chapter 1 . 11/11/2005
Excellent. Rich and provacative. I'd encourage you to move your second line to your first, giving your poem a total of three lines and a haiku-like structure. Not sure about the ellipse (...) at the end, but other than that, perfect. Thanks for posting.
Princess-anna57 chapter 1 . 11/11/2005
Short and effective. Awesome! Write on! _

Anna