|Reviews for The Mirror|
| Lossefalmiel chapter 1 . 11/28/2005
cool! would you be willing to let me use that if I gave credit to you? it's pretty cool.
| in theory chapter 1 . 11/18/2005
Pretty. Sorry it's been awhile since I waded down your neverending bio hehe. Found myself a nice little cache of unread poems *gets to work.
| Squidge VR6 chapter 1 . 11/16/2005
LOVED IT LOADS N LOADS N LOADS N LOADS!Wow.. really awesome writin!
| Tori Keedah chapter 1 . 11/13/2005
Mulan is still around but she doesn't post on FP anymore.
The lot had been asking where she was too.
| RoseMcCann chapter 1 . 11/13/2005
I like it. Short, sweet and to the point. What more can I say?
| Lowell Boston chapter 1 . 11/11/2005
Excellent. Rich and provacative. I'd encourage you to move your second line to your first, giving your poem a total of three lines and a haiku-like structure. Not sure about the ellipse (...) at the end, but other than that, perfect. Thanks for posting.
| Princess-anna57 chapter 1 . 11/11/2005
Short and effective. Awesome! Write on! _