Great story! Definitely among my top favourites. Thank you for sharing it with us :)

I love this story

to w.t.f: u don't actually sound like a fan of books so why not find some M rated story or even watch a porn..pervert!.

great sense of humour...great story!

At first I thought you were using reverse psychology to make us read your story, but then I realised that your story does actually suck. It's terrible. (No offence meant) I mean seriously if this is what FictionPress readers like, then I wonder what they'd do when they come across a story that is actually good-say that its bad?-_-

At first I thought you were using reverse psychology to make us read your story, but then I realised that your story does actually suck. It's terrible. (No offence meant) I mean seriously if this is what FictionPress readers like, then I wonder what they'd do when they come across a story that is actually good-say that its bad?

I absolutely love this story! You're such a good writer

Hey great story! I really enjoyed it, thank you for sharing!

Somehow this story feels a little bit too cliche. But i love it! The story is light and funny. I wish you would go deeper with each of the character. Keep writing good stories! :)

Wasn't there a sequel to this? From what I remember, it was written better and I enjoyed it more.

I Love Your Story I Just Seen You Mite Delect It

Please Please Dont If It Was A Book In The Shops I Would So Buy It

Your A Good Write Dont Think Your Not

Please Write More Storys :)

Loved it!

I loved it! I was a little worried when I read the summary, but wow it was so good!

This seems like a really cute story :)

loved it! nick is so cutee :):)

sequeal coming?