Reviews for Black velvet
AmberMarieee chapter 1 . 6/14/2008
Wow, this is amazing. I love it.
laughter at the funeral chapter 1 . 3/28/2006
oh...the imagery in this is totally awesome...i can really see the girl in the black dress..its like i can see this in a painting...im telling you this can be a good inspiration for a painting...you did really well on this...

truly yours...
she's not breathing chapter 1 . 3/25/2006
ty. this is mind-blowingly beautiful. i love it so much.

~kait
chaos called creation chapter 1 . 2/12/2006
Chilling ending; good descriptions.
For Absent Friends chapter 1 . 2/4/2006
Thanks for reviewing my poems. I'm glad you like them :)

Now on to your poem-the imagery is gorgeous! So sad, and yet so beautiful at the same time. I especially like "She sits beside her tombstone now and waits, still clothed in black velvet..."

Absolutely wonderful.
Changethesubject chapter 1 . 12/5/2005
powerful, sad and very well expressed. i liked the way you described everything - nice work.
Pink Sparrow chapter 1 . 12/2/2005
It's so sad! and pretty and i love your description and just the way its written. I love the whole thing SO MUCH. this is so good. nice work!
pwnedbygrace chapter 1 . 11/14/2005
Very nice use of imagery... I really like it. :-)
Ninja Commander chapter 1 . 11/12/2005
Dark and cryptic, with a taste of sad romance. Very well done