Reviews for A Melting Candle Of Humility
CRaZy-OdIN chapter 1 . 8/14/2006
wow, so personal and so touching. Some amazing emotive language here and use of imagery. this is going on my favs. 'You are like a candle that mets as it grows' amazing, a sense of love and desperation and loss for something you havent even lost yet. I love it, even if it is a bit on the sad side, keep it up.
Gabriel Lyman chapter 1 . 12/12/2005
I've felt that way about a girl before, twas insane how i really loved her and then was let down, but It seems you know that feeling too... good work.
SeaVoi chapter 1 . 11/17/2005
The "My ..." parts are great they really show a struggle in the relationship! Very nice.
Arichos chapter 1 . 11/14/2005
Metaphorical in depth give a great feeling to the reader. Line after line is beautifully written
SayIt'sWrong chapter 1 . 11/13/2005
This is so deep and beautiful. A very moving piece and the emotions are really clear. Well done with this. QueenVixta
Aquafied chapter 1 . 11/12/2005
one true thing
Sierra Valentine chapter 1 . 11/12/2005
That was so sweet! -steals- Nah, just joking, but I really loved it..
PerpetualBliss44 chapter 1 . 11/12/2005
that is absolutely ... beautiful.
eraced chapter 1 . 11/12/2005
nice work. keep writing.

thank you for the review. i'm caimer now, but still think it's my fault. i don't no if he's in hospital or not, but will try and talk to him tomorow.i dunno if he's talking to me. i'm gonna try and help again thank you.

decaying