What the hell! THis guy is just ergh -.-

Psh this guy well the guy I want to kill confuses me at times :O

awwwwww poor guy DX

He is messing with him in a messed up way :/ I hate it

SEriously this guy is getting on my nervess...I'm going to kill a bish today :O

Lolz in his face :P hahahahaha

Awww that's how he plans to hurt the guy :/ So sad

This story is so sad, and maybe a bit messed up, but I can't get enough of it. *-*

Wow . . . . very dark and beautiful, love your imagery, especially in the last chapter.

This is brilliant, it really is. I absolutely adore the plot concept, it's so dark and heartwrenchingly bittersweet. The contrast in characters is interesting, with Alex's cruelty and Shain's vulnerability; you developed them very well.

I loved the desperation of their relationship, how dysfunctional and twisted it was. And damn, that ending shook me up; it was so sick but such a perfect conclusion, really. I'm still in awe.

I noticed a few mistakes and bits where the flow could have been better, but overall you had a pretty solid control of your writing. Just a bit of fine-tuning here and there would make your work stand out even more.

Everything you put into the style (the shortness, the implications, the descriptions) all blended together perfectly and really gave the story character. Beautiful work.

~ceastical

WHOAHMYGOD! AMAZING! My face was :O In that very last paragraph. Like, DUDE! He was so crazy, and twisted, I cant believe he killed him! OMG! His view point was amazing, so sick! OMG! The words you used were PERFECT to describe how he felt, It pratically felt like I was feeling what he was feeling, which was scary by the way. But MAN! Amazing! My new favorite story. No really. I'm going to, like, totally obsess over it now.

the story is amazing, and the ending was.. wow..

I simply adore the way you wrote this. The ending made me wanna cry, but I love it all the same.

Woah.

The whole story was amazing, and the ending was totally...I mean...wow.