Brilliant seven-lined orgasm, honestly.

Gorgeous

Shavo

This had a depressing tune to it with a hint of romance in it to make it even better. At least, thats what I think. Good job on this. Its really magical in my opinion. KW!

Davida

i like the images it creates...and so it's pretty artfully written.

i like this.. short and very true

i like it, short but very effective, well done, a very interesting poem.

lots of loveAC

(haha! fantastic review from real horrorshow...brilliant) anyways, this was wonderful, short, bittersweet and maybe not so simple. -the Lady Elaine

If I could make love to this I would.

(That's a compliment.)

that last line is something... this is just a wow, for so many reasons. so short and also sharp. well done.

hm... so much in this...

I felt your frustration, and a little despair.

I liked it. Can't say the same for bloc party though! :s

Thanks as always.

Oo,wow.I could say a lot of things but I think "its fucking amazing" is short enough,since I'm in a hurry.A fave.

oh, you dazzle almost like a short picture, captured in a mind, hand, sort of last .

ohnmygod. oomg. omg. omg.

this was just drop dead gorgeous. (SQUEE) you made this so sad, romantic and chilling all at once. how do do IT?

* noelle

"listen, my sweet,this subatomic lust(for)beautyisn't working" bravo!