Reviews for message in a bottle
addie pray chapter 1 . 12/25/2005
Brilliant seven-lined orgasm, honestly.
flaming.footprints chapter 1 . 12/4/2005
Gorgeous

Shavo
blacktearsofinnocence chapter 1 . 11/26/2005
This had a depressing tune to it with a hint of romance in it to make it even better. At least, thats what I think. Good job on this. Its really magical in my opinion. KW!

Davida
notACTUALLYwriting chapter 1 . 11/22/2005
i like the images it creates...and so it's pretty artfully written.
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 11/20/2005
i like this.. short and very true
AllyCred chapter 1 . 11/19/2005
i like it, short but very effective, well done, a very interesting poem.

lots of loveAC
Haberdasher chapter 1 . 11/17/2005
(haha! fantastic review from real horrorshow...brilliant) anyways, this was wonderful, short, bittersweet and maybe not so simple. -the Lady Elaine
hey maria chapter 1 . 11/15/2005
If I could make love to this I would.

(That's a compliment.)
beti213 chapter 1 . 11/15/2005
that last line is something... this is just a wow, for so many reasons. so short and also sharp. well done.
account not in use chapter 1 . 11/14/2005
hm... so much in this...
astral boy chapter 1 . 11/13/2005
I felt your frustration, and a little despair.

I liked it. Can't say the same for bloc party though! :s

Thanks as always.
Elizabeth Ebony chapter 1 . 11/13/2005
Oo,wow.I could say a lot of things but I think "its fucking amazing" is short enough,since I'm in a hurry.A fave.
Aquafied chapter 1 . 11/12/2005
oh, you dazzle almost like a short picture, captured in a mind, hand, sort of last .
poetic abortion chapter 1 . 11/12/2005
ohnmygod. oomg. omg. omg.

this was just drop dead gorgeous. (SQUEE) you made this so sad, romantic and chilling all at once. how do do IT?

* noelle
Smoky Bear chapter 1 . 11/12/2005
"listen, my sweet,this subatomic lust(for)beautyisn't working" bravo!
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