Reviews for The Heroine's Journey
JJSLAM2129 chapter 1 . 2/14/2007
It is a little random (as there seemed to be some good details absent), but I think it's very funny! This should have gotten a lot more reviews...

Eventhough this was just a school assignment, there are a few minor things to point out. For example: "When Jamie arrived on Earth, she smelt a really different, clear air." Whenever you can, try to avoid using the word 'really' in formal text (unless it's first person or, such as your case, a parody). I'd also probably change 'a' to 'something'. Just a thought.

Otherwise, looking good, a funny take on the Hero motif! Thanks so much for the review. Keep up the great work! ( :: )
Milo Leorn chapter 1 . 12/5/2005
Wow. That's good. I can't believe nobody reviewed. I'm a fan of many different types of stories, but this is SO good. I like it, a lot. I'm happy to review. Oh, by the way. You reviewed for my little "Intense Insanity" story. I just wanted to tell you that your guess is, well, right! I was thinking of having Andy walk in on her while she was in the shower. Funny great minds can think alike. At least, our mind is great. I don't know about mine. Still, you're good. At both writing and guessing. Thanks. Jade