Reviews for Flowers in the Bathroom Tiles
Calico.Grace chapter 1 . 1/17/2007
Nice job :) I really do think that this story is a comment on modern society. Like the line about "an eight year old examining a christmas present". Love her sarcasm.

oh, and the line "I guess things are so bad on the surface..."

Gold. I really like it. Hope you can continue the story. maybe Adelle sees what others don't and that's why they call her crazy. Once again, wonderful work. :D

delete my freakin account chapter 3 . 12/10/2005
Aw... poor Adelle! I think she just gets into trouble because of what she says (or in some cases, doesn't say). Good story and love the idea! Hope to see more chapters soon!

kakera chapter 3 . 11/29/2005
Damn, I really like this story. Adelle doesn't sound like she's crazy; more like she's incredibly artistic and misunderstood. And your description of the mental institution...damn. If you just made the walls pastel yellow, I would think that you were describing our local hell hole, better known as Memorial Hospital.

I heard about you while I was browsing through the LotR section of (though tecnically, I'm still boycotting it, hence the lack of review). I love Rising Dark because Willow is such a developed character. I had to see what else you could write and I'm incredibly impressed. Please keep writing and post more soon; good writers are becoming an endangered species.

Added you to the good ol' favorites lists and Author Alert. Hope to hear/see/whatever more from you soon!

-Tobira, signed and sealed
Blayne chapter 1 . 11/14/2005
I like your narrative viewpoint. I'm sorry this isn't as detailed as I can make it, but right now I haven't really the time to thoroughly analyze anything. I just wanted to say that so far, this is very intriguing and once I get a little more time (which I hope is soon or I'll go crazy) I'll be able to leave more helpful comments. Just keep doing what you're doing.