Reviews for Those Girls
bjw chapter 1 . 12/11/2005
Man. Just ohmygoshsobeautiful.:D It's almost heartbreaking. You manage to capture emotions in such a simple, honest voice...LOVE YOUR WORK! "The warm weight on your stomach as she sprawls across you/The ache as you cradle your head against her arm/Knowing and not caring that she’s using you" WOW. This poem is so delicate...my heart aches for "you". Excellent work!
quiet-zone chapter 1 . 11/14/2005
o.O. So pretty! Sign on sometime... Spacing is most annoying thing in the world/
emmathree chapter 1 . 11/13/2005
Someday when you're famous i'm going to be able to say:

"i remember one of the nights i spent in her room we spilled candle wax all over the bedsheets"

and people will look at me funny but secretly they'll be jealous because i knew you BEFORE you were famous.
364 unbirthdays chapter 1 . 11/13/2005
very nice. Yeah, i'm not too fond of the 'spacing' idea, either. but it's a really good poem.
poetic abortion chapter 1 . 11/12/2005
*mutters* FP is a jackass regarding the formating. I can not use brackets (which I am REALLY fond of) or correctly space my poetry. so I sympathise with your plight. :'(

loved this. per usual in my reaction. but; hey, you are brillant. :) love it. love it.

* noelle