short chapter but good chapter ;) but i hope you update soon cause that was mean to leave it at a cliffhanger like that :D

Yay! You Updated! (And yes, Updated does need a capital letter. Graow.)

Conor is a.d.o.r.a.b.l.e. Absolutely. I love him.

How can you make Caitlin leave! HOw! HOW!

Evil evil evil...

Me wants to know what is the mystery about the flowersies...

You escape the wrath of Evil Chainsaw... for a little while. He has retreated a little, but will not be pleased if you don't update soon.

Grr.

Update soon! I LOVE this story. Completement (voila, french!) Please update soon! Ardan's back story sounds fun. (I nearly wrote 'backside' then... that wuldn't have been a complete lie, either XP)

Keep writing, I love your story!

Mhmm I loved that you updated.. totally made my day.

awsome chpt. she's stupid please continue

i wish u luck on your writing

p.s. seriously hasn't she ever seen beauty & the beast as a kid ? and forget the part bell runs away beast gets killed blah blah blah... unless she was weird and never saw the movie lol

Wow...that was quick too ;) A little too short for my liking, but I always love seeing your updates. Perhaps that's why it's too short, cause I love it so much. :)

I definitely didn't expect this part of Beauty and the Beast so fast though. I think that you could've dragged on the scenes a little more; inner turmoil and all that is what always gets the readers ;)

As always, please update soon.

Cheers

-solin

Hey, you gotta update, this story rocks, and i would LOVE a chapter with Ardan's Back story! please update again soon. -Gives Homemade Brownies and Pie-

This is an amazing fic... Call me silly, but I love the tale of Beauty and the Beast and I love the new spin you're putting on it! Great fic and update soon please! ~Mystix

ardan sure doesn't know how to treat a lady :( gr but derrick sounds sexy :)

Not really my type of story but im liking it so far. keep up the good work and please bring poor josh back doesnt he deserve a bigger part inthe story?

heehee, this is exciting! _ Ardan has competition! hah! I missed a comment on the last chapter, but I just had to put in another AW for Conor! That kid drives me insane. So cute! And mud fights! I used to love those when I was little. My best friend and I would run her outdoor faucet to make ourselves mud and everything. haha. So yah, good stuff! -_-

Oye!I mean, talk about a jealous guy that can't get his feelings straight. Oh boy, he really has his head in the , loved it!And by the way, Conner is adorable!Eva

[frowns]

She's going to stay and help him after he killed her parents?

Great so far! PLEASE update soon!

Are you really givin pies? ;-) Nah really though awesoem chapter I like how it showed the emotional pain they are going through. Great job! Update soon!

*Cackles inanely*

I love all the torturingness. Well, it makes a really good story, even if I hate it! Grr.

What does inanely mean anyway? i've never known.

Right, the chapter...

Conor. Is. Adorable. I love him. I really really do. He's gorgeous.

"I smirked and walked towards the suspended glass. "A girl, or shall I say, young woman." His eyes certainly lightened up at that point. "However, if I find out that you touch her in any way, shape or form," at this point I grabbed the glass in midair and crushed it in my hands, "I will castrate you." This paragraph had me in HYSTERICS! I don't even know why, I just thought Ardan was brilliant in it.

I wanna know what kind of a voice Derrick has. Ardan has a growly voice (Specially when he's angry) and I can't picture what Derrick sounds like. I'm guessing he's kind of supposed to be like Ardan's opposite, so something honey-like I'm assuming, but would like to know your view.

"I ended up running into a certain muscular something." Oh! Derrick is such a sleazeball. A very charming sleazeball. But I hate him because Ardan is such a loveable character! Arghh! You have confuzzled me entirely.

"I was winded by the time I reached the top." This suddenly seemed to disappear in the next couple of paragraphs. I dunno, maybe just some passing reference - "I looked around, trying to catch my breath" or something would round it off better.

"His chest pressed against my backside." I'm sorry, I souldn't help but laugh at this bit - I have a very visual imagination. Her BACKSIDE? Like her butt? I just imagined him kneeling on the ground behind her - which was a very strange image, I promise you. I corrected it in my head immediately.

"an icy tone that seemed to spit daggers." Fabulous wording. Really really great imagery.

"his eyes filled with hurt." Aw! I swear, I love Ardan. I really do.

"I whimpered half-heartedly" That was really nice, made it seem more realistic - lovely touch.

"I will make it up to her. I have to." !

Okay, you HAVE to update soon.

Yeah, you conveyed the 'pushing down of feelings' thing really well in both of them. I practically shouted 'just get over yourself!' at the screen (Through the screen to Ardan really, but no-one else would have known that)

Wow, you have got me completely hooked. Please update soon! I love this story! -

I should probably return ardan to you if you are to write another chapter - I had planned to take him away today, but I guess you need him more *Returns a scared looking and dishevelled ardan wearing handcuffs*

Ciao! Update soon!