Reviews for The Beast in the Library
AubriannaKnight chapter 9 . 12/14/2005
omg This chapter was great! I love how Ardan will switch from teen personality to snobby know it all adult. Who is Lucille to Ardan? His g/f? Does she love him or is it just for sex? Because to break the curse you never said it had to be one of the sorceresses realatives Ardan had to get to love him. You just said it had to be a girl. Well thats what I thought.. Ok awesome chapter keep it up..
ErBeBr chapter 9 . 12/13/2005
Yay! Yay! Yay!Freaking awesome, but what a weird bi-polar change. Kinda makes one wonder!Heh, Well any way just wanted to let you know this was superb!Eva
Pandemonium Express chapter 9 . 12/13/2005
gah! So cool. This chapter was sad! T_T So sad...but amazingful, nevertheless. So...does he have two personalities as well as two bodies? He said he didn't know what he said to her, right? The whole Jekyl/Hyde thing? That could get complicated... _

And why is he fighting his emotions for her? Is that a "I'm just so used to being a cold, heartless evil dude" type of thing or something is there a reason not to love her? Can't he break the spell by falling in love/her falling in love with him? Or only through magic? Is he scared of being hurt? hm...mmkay, I be stopping now with the questions because I need to go to the bathroom and more importantly, there's ice cream downstairs! (queue merry jig)
Plinky chapter 9 . 12/13/2005

In this chapter I have had goosebumps, you have sped up my heart-rate (If I die from high bloodpressure you're going to get a phone call) I have almost cried, I have ... god knows what. I was completely lost in the story!

Okay, outburst over. Amazing chapter, one of my favourites so far! Yay!

Where do I start? Oh yeah, the beginning, right...

The hug was lovely. I nearly said 'No!' outloud when he let go. And that wouldn't have been good. Beautiful description.

'INVISO-GUM' that's brilliant. and so true. I swear, I'm being haunted by inviso-gum. it gets me into all kinds of trouble.

"Did I just say he was sensual?" Oh yes you did! And I believe you!

Ardan was so ... cold. I nearly cried. Although I knew that cos you'd made him do that, there was going to be a lovely bit with him comforting her coming up. I just had to wait for it...

The flashback was really well done. Horrible though. I could hardly bear to keep reading it.

He was so swet! Argh. You have re-awakened my dormant hormones. Aargh.

He cried! I'm going to cry. Why are you doing this to me?

How do you manage to make him so loveable when he's evil?


I don't understand.

But I love him anyway. I really do.

Apart from a couple of typos nicely written. I love Ardan. Can I steal him?

I CAN'T wait for your next update! Please please please update soon! -
SkepticCritic chapter 9 . 12/12/2005
oh...i thought that's what you did last chapter...maybe i just wrote more fluffy airy nothing of content're such a bad author...i'm not sure why you bother sending me chapters (not that i mind)'s not like it really needs it...i think i found all of what? three are authors who need so much more help...unfortunatly they're the ones who say "i had four people proof for me" and they still end up with mistakes...ok come on, how is that even possible? and you are evil...evil squared...simply because it sounds cooler...join me...i have decided to overthrow the can help me...i shall overthrow him...just as soon as i decide whether he's real or not...sorry...agnostic...not really seriously can't beleive you left with a cliffie like that...

People of Earth, The Universe, and everything in existance, hear my proclamation. I hereby darn all authors fond of cliffies straight to heck...where they still hopefully have computers so you can keep updating...

ehehehehehehehehehe...guess who had way too much sugar today? and guess who's knee is totally screwed up and had to wear a knee brace all day? and guess who keeps mispelling knee and having to erase it and retype it? if you hadn't already guessed the answer is.










alivewithlove13 chapter 9 . 12/12/2005
poor arden :( poor caitlyn :( poor everybody :'( *cries*

Now that I'm done crying I love the last two sentances it pulls the whole chapter together so nicely it's awesome. this chapter makes me sad because he killed her mum and dad :( but your amazing writing still makes me happy :) yay for this chappie! update soon! (psst, rust spoons rock :)
BangBangYourDead chapter 9 . 12/12/2005
Aw that was so sad! I feel bad for him and Caitlin! What was with the flowers?
LadyWriter chapter 9 . 12/12/2005
awesome... haha I think ARAR is a cute nickname it's kind of like how I used to call my brother nicknames. Conor is a cute character. This was an awesome chapter by the way. I liked the character interactions and how it gives us a deeper look into Ardan's darkside. Update soon!
Lifeless China Doll chapter 9 . 12/12/2005
YAY-NESS! -showers you with chocolate- thank you so much for updating! YAY i love this chapter, its kinda sad though, very well written but sad all the same. oh what happened to her would have been so tramatic for her. how old was she? I LOVE YOUR CHAPTER!...and chocolate -grins and gives you more chocolate-
goldring chapter 8 . 12/8/2005
Hehe, sugar is fun. Whe! Oh, guess what! I ran across another BATB story...Mistress of Argyris, or something like that. With all this nasty schoolwork, I haven't had a chance to read it, but I did get through Castle Mirrors - great recomendation, by the way.

Excellent job, I might add, with the added characterization of this story. It's just close enough to the original to be recognized, but not so close that Disney's gonna come after you ;-P So, yeah. I think that's about all I have to say... And so I leave you with these parting words: UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE! ;-D Keep writing!
FANtastico chapter 4 . 12/6/2005
wow! this story really IS good! it's very charming and funny.. hehehe.. and hmm.. mount baldy? i've been to that place before.. hehe )
Phoenix-ofthe-Goldenrose chapter 8 . 12/6/2005
Yay! This is so awesome! I can't wait to hear more about the garden and Ardan and Conor and Caitlin and...everything! I'm way too hyper...
LadyWriter chapter 8 . 12/6/2005
I haven't found it yet but I'm still looking :-D Awesome chappie I love Ardan and Conor was a cute little kid. Update soon!
AubriannaKnight chapter 8 . 12/6/2005
Great chapter...We already kinda know Ardan's plan.. Wasn't it just to use her to break the spell? That's not really that evil, considering she knows that's what he wants from her. Unless he knows something that hasn't been mentioned yet. Awe, Arden's little brother is adorable. Would Arden have lived so long if he wasn't cursed? Do the people he rule know about his curse? If not do they wonder how he is still living?
Plinky chapter 8 . 12/6/2005
It doesn't matter that nothing happens, I thought this was a brilliant chapter! I love your updates. -

I love how you torture your characters. Hehe. Ardan with no clothes. Lol.

I love Ardan's teenage hormones. They are hilarious. Absolutely brilliant.

Althought at no point did Ardan seem to put his clothes on - it wasn't mentioned, and at one point I thought he was still naked!

"Make me happy in pants. Sarcasm is what I eat for breakfast." Hahahahaha.

"It looked like the fairytale castle of some sick, twisted little child" lovely description.

I love the carebear undies. Hilarious. The thing is I can actually imagine him doing that! With anyone else it would be like - no, that's just going to far, butwith him I really can see it! Lol.

"I think you may be falling for her Beast," a little voice whispered." should be 'I think you may be falling for her, beast,' otherwise it sounds like he's falling for a beast that belongs to her! Lol.

I like how the mirror has a personality. Lol.

Conor. Is. Adorable. He's so cute! Aw! And Ardan's so sweet with him too. I'm melting. I've gone gooey.

So cute. Adorable. Ohh. Please update soon!-
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