Reviews for The Beast in the Library
SkepticCritic chapter 8 . 12/5/2005
ergh i hate computers sometimes...i just typed out the review and went to post it and it was expired or something...ugh...alright i'll try and rewrite it then...

you're so bad you're almost like...well you're almost like me sometimes...*waves hands in mock entrancing way* all shall be revealed...evil author...hehehe...i know i'm evil...just ask my friends...they'll be only to happy to tell you what a demon i am...

i love editing...they always thank you even if you didn't do anything...i mean this has got to be one of the easiest chapters i've ever was was almost surreal...just don't do what i friend edited it for me and she was like why do you even bother having me edit i started leaving mistakes for her to first she was really excited...until she realized i was doing it on purpose...hehehehe...she pouted for an entire was fairly funny...well i thought it was anyway...i think odd things are funny and amusing though...again just ask my friends...

bangBangYourDead...i've seen that reviewer for a couple other stories i that not one of the coolest pen names you've ever seen? mine is decidedly uncreative and unimaginative...

isn't it amazing what poor grammar, spelling and punctuation i have in my reviews yet i review for more than half a dozen authors? sorry just thought i'd point it out...i really must go now before i get myself started on something else...
My OnlY SuNshInE chapter 8 . 12/5/2005
I love this story! Adran is awesome and Caitlin is so funny. I love Conor he is so cute! I hope you continue writing! I would love to read more!
My OnlY SuNshInE chapter 4 . 12/5/2005
I loved this chapter! It was hillarious. I hope you continue writing. I've enjoyed the stroy so far.
alivewithlove13 chapter 8 . 12/5/2005
I liked this chapter. Cute, short. I like Connor, he's a cute little kid. Update update update! (The reason I said that three times is still unknown to me but good job :)
Lifeless China Doll chapter 8 . 12/5/2005
HIYA! -Gives lots and lots of chocolates to you- HERE! eat and be happy... ok i dont know where i got that from but still. AWESOME CHAPTER! i love this story... you rock! please update as soon as you can, Please!
BangBangYourDead chapter 8 . 12/5/2005
I love this story. Its so sweet.

"Sarcasm is what I eat for breakfast."

I loved that part! Lol was .

update soon. [
Pandemonium Express chapter 8 . 12/5/2005
haha, YAY! Holy Cow, Connor is adorable! I kind of want to adopt him so I can hug him whenever I want. That's fantastic (I love that word...random, I know, but unless you're dripping with sarcasm, it's impossible to say without sounding excited)that you use those insults in real life. It's so much fun making up that sort of stuff. XD

AMAZING update, eagerly awaiting more. hehe, poor Arden...stuck with his raging hormones.
BangBangYourDead chapter 7 . 12/3/2005
oh my gawd You have to update!
Lux chapter 7 . 12/3/2005
Bada ba ba ba I'm lovin' it. Seriously, this is one of the first stories I read on this site and it made a great first impression. Oh, and is Josh coming back anytime soon?
Ashgyrl chapter 7 . 11/30/2005
I always loved the story beauty and the beast but I like this even more. Its funny as hell and I can't wait for the other chapters. Quick Question though. Is Josh her cuz are friend r what because I have been confused for a while
LadyWriter chapter 7 . 11/30/2005
Awesomely done! I love how Ardan acts in the car. The interaction was awesome! I'll have to try to locate that song and see what it's about. :-D Update soon.
Phoenix-ofthe-Goldenrose chapter 7 . 11/30/2005
Ardan and Caitlin are so cute together. His kingdom place sounds really cool. Can't wait for next chapter!
codyismypup chapter 7 . 11/30/2005
*laughs loudly* I love Caitlin. She's just awesome. I love how she said "I just was growled at by a human man-dog with an eyebrow piercing!" That made me laugh so hard. update as soon as possible
yarrowicefrost chapter 7 . 11/30/2005
AWESOME story and a well-written one too! I love Beauty and the Beast, so I loved reading ur story...cant wait to read more soon!
Plinky chapter 7 . 11/30/2005
Okay, before the review..

You know how Ardan said "She was biting her lip. I wanted to bite her lip." I was writing yesterday, and i wrote that exact sentence! But the other way around! (She wanted to bite his lip) How scary is that?

Okay, ouburst over.

nice chapter! I really do love your writing. ;P

"I had begun to doze off when I felt her cool hands running themselves through my fur" It wasn't clear whether she had stopped the car or not at this point. I hope she had! Hehe.

"Why is it that all I could think about was her petting me?" as in - he wanted her to pet him?

O, btw, you do the change in him very well. It's really clearly written, and gives the reader a good idea of what it must be like. (Lol, I'm even talkign about it as if it's real! Maybe it is...)

"and realized we were parked" ah, okay.

""There are no dirt roads around here." I scoffed. Or at least, I tried to." It would be clearer if you put the actions on a new line. It looks like- Ardan scoffed "There are no..."

"I saw you eying that butt flap" made ME laugh! Hehe.

"Holy fish sticks in a pile of manure" I like holy fish sticks... Lovely randomness!

You know how Caitlin started laughing randomly. I do that. ALL THE TIME. My friends think I'm crazy. Who am I kidding? Everyone thinks I'm crazy!

All right, fine. Everyone knows I'm crazy. Happy? ;P

Nice chapter! I can't wait for your next update! Ah!

You bring out my random side.

Bad girl.

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