|Reviews for The Beast in the Library|
| SkepticCritic chapter 3 . 11/28/2005
you wrote the transformation very well...i have goosebumps...i love beauty and the beast...i know all the words to 'beauty and the beast' and 'be our guest' by heart...i know the lines that lumier says before'be our guest' as well...i'm not obsessed with disney movies...i just like singing along...even if i am tone deaf and can't carry a tune to save my life...
| SkepticCritic chapter 2 . 11/28/2005
you sound like me...apologizing for it being confusing and saying it'll clear up eventually...and apologizing for short lenghts...its the most annoying thing...you handwrite it all out and it looks nice and long and you're just like 'yes!' then you type it all out and it becomes this wimpy little chapter and it just totally disappoints you...okay well it disappoints me...its like these reviews...they look so long and the thing on the side is scrolling then you post it and its barely four lines...i hate that...i love writing long reviews because in my mind a longer review equals a longer response...but that's assuming they do reader responses...i don't know why but for some reason only my last chapters of each story have the responses...i so coulda sworn that i did it for all chapters but i must just be imagining things...
he brought her a book...that's so cute...a bit creepy and almost stalkerish...but since i'm crossing my fingers they end up together in the end its okay...
i would ask if everything is going to be explained but that is pretty much what you told us in the a/n isn't it? alright i'll just move on to the next chapter...
oh btw, i remembered to put my e-mail on this one...i kinda forgot last time...heh heh...
| SkepticCritic chapter 1 . 11/28/2005
okay i have to say it was the weirdest thing...i was looking through romance looking for a new story to read...came across this one...i didn't have time to read it then so i put it under my favorites list (the one on the internet not fp, not enough room for stories on fp) and later that day...the same day!...i get a another review for one of my stories...that in itself is something to get excited about...anyway, it's a signed review so i click on it to see if i've read any of the stories...and lo and behold its the author of the story i had just found that day...
so today, i finally have a chance to read it...i'm going to review on every chapter simply because i like to and i know its more fun to get four reviews than one...especially if they're thought provoking...although i have to warn you now...in order for thoughts to be provoking that implies that you have to use your brain and using your brain implies you have to have one...meaning that none of my reviews will be thought provoking...hehehehe...i'm on a sugar high and its not even noon yet...
btw (by the way...sry if i use a lot of acronyms i love 'em), if you want a beta i'm free...i'm sorry...that sounds like a plug but i love editing (that is the career that i would most like to persue as soon as i get to that stage in life) and i love being able to read the chapter before anyone else...but i do love editing...anyway, if you need a beta i'm open and you can just e-mail the chapters to me, i'll put in comments for spelling, grammar, punctuation, sentence structure, and how to make it read better, then e-mail it back to you...okay anyway...btts (back to the story)...
about what time period is this? from the way they talk and act it seems almost modern but i'm not sure...i love him...somehow in real life we hate the egotistic and arrogant guys but in stories we can't get enough of them...maybe 'cuz we know eventually their love interest will humble them...hopefully...
| alivewithlove13 chapter 6 . 11/28/2005
This new chapter is so good. And you mentioned me in your review replies *DANCES AROUND* I'M so happy. I love your writing. Keep writing! UPDATE FAST NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS!reka
| AubriannaKnight chapter 6 . 11/28/2005
woo, that was exciting..
| Plinky chapter 6 . 11/28/2005
Wow, I'm glad you liked the review! Aahh, okay, I get the cursey thingy now. Coolio. You're very welcome for the review! Look out, cos here comes another one...
Damn, I couldn't find so many crits for this one! ;) I'll just have to work especially hard.
"In the back of my mind, something urgent was trying to break through, but I could not seem to process it. Something about the sun..." Ni-ice. Good hint. I likie it.
And the description of Caitlin was lovely.
It seems a little weird that she went from laughing to crying in the space of a few minutes.
Aww, the hug was so cute!
Wow, really good description of the change.
Ooh, something has just hit me. Ha! If she wanted to ask Ardan about who he was, why did she ask Josh to go? Or maybe she knew he'd say no. She had to ask him I guess. I would have done. I think. Okay, I've just answered my own question - don't worry. Lol.
"I screamed as something pounced on me and pinned me to the ground. "Quiet girl," he spat, "Prick boy’s a-coming. And he's a terrible shot."" Did falling on the ground not hurt?
"butt holio" hahaha.
"Ass hat" hahahahaha.
"And Ardan didn't have his clothes." exactly what were you implying from this line, huh? *Mischevious grin*
Oh no, so josh was left alone all by himself in a scary cabiny thing in the dark! I'm such a wuss. Haha.
Nice chapter! Can't wait until your next update! ;)
| Lifeless China Doll chapter 6 . 11/28/2005
Oh my Gosh! i love this story! i love this chapter! AWESOME! please update soon. PLEAESE!
Signed The crystal tears ofFirefly Bunni
P.S. sorry for the hyper review, He-he i had to much sugar he-he he-he
| Xarilyn chapter 6 . 11/27/2005
update soon! love the story (:
| Mi.Ishi chapter 6 . 11/27/2005
M, I think this chapter could have been better executed. It has a lot of potential that hasn't been quite fulfilled. And I think it's moving a little too fast now. I mean, there was no hint that Caitlin knew who and what he was, and that she was a magicker whatever. But I think it was good, if only you had extended this chapter into, mm, three? Because the chapters you write are short, so three would actually be about right.
Anyway, despite that critique, I am looking forward to the next chapter.
| LadyWriter chapter 5 . 11/26/2005
Awesome! I like how Ardan acts and I like Caitlin's character. Josh is awesome as well! Update soon!
| Mi.Ishi chapter 5 . 11/25/2005
Oh, fabby chapter! I loved it! Oh my god...yes, it was super good. I can't wait for the next.
| alivewithlove13 chapter 2 . 11/25/2005
is good... continue.
| minute-glass chapter 5 . 11/25/2005
interesting story :) update soon
| Lifeless China Doll chapter 5 . 11/25/2005
oh my gosh! awesome story! does josh like Caitlyn or is he just protective? you rock! please update soon.
| Phoenix-ofthe-Goldenrose chapter 5 . 11/25/2005
I love this story! I've always loved the story of Beauty and the Beast, and this is just so cool because it's modern! Update soon! I must know what happens.