Damn, that was hot. I so wish i was that was great! please make new chapters and update!-Avey

it's a great chapter you've got here... i went to have a look at the list of stories you've written and was shocked to see a really long list of them...sad to say many of them are only in their initial chapters... please continue updating this one... i can't wait!

Uh... I'm a bit confused. If you update maybe I'll understand more.

o u so have to continue this story, its sounds so good! Wats the guys name? he sounds well fit. But im glad the girl is not a weepy kinda gal coz that would jus b annoying. She sounds like she can stand up for herself. And the whole kiss thing at the end, imean u can jus leave it to our imaginations now can u? I really wanna see how it all turns out in the nxt chappie so please post one or will b sad. LOL! will b glad to review it if u do! thanx in advance (that means u gotta - hehe) :P X

Woo!