Reviews for The Beast in the Library |
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![]() ![]() ![]() AH! Such a good story so far! But I have to go to class now...dang. I will read the rest later, promise. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my. I really REALLY like the first chapter. I love the Beauty and the Beast story, so I hope you do it justice. :) Off to the next chapter! |
![]() ![]() wow! i love how this is somewhat based on beauty and the beast. I love that movie. :D keep up the fantastic work. looking forward to the next chapter so update soon! |
![]() ![]() WOW! This is one of the best stories I have ever read! I hope you update soon;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey! Wow. Okay, I liked these two chappies! I really did. But your answers to my reviews aren't exactly encouraging. Anyway, I can't wait to read more about this! I love it! UPDATE SOON! PLEASE? Luv ya,Tashi :) |
![]() ![]() Holy cow! I almost completly forgot to tell you that I will no longer be able to beta for you...Someone hacked onto my aol account and so I had to delete it so I no longer have an e-mail address where i can be reached...I have to wait for chapters just like everyone else now...This makes me so sad... |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story...especially...um...all of it... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ahh...That was adorable...Too bad this isn't rated m...Then they could take it a bit further next time...or whenever they admit to each other that they love each other...That would be good too...ah...They make such a cute couple..And who could the face possibly be? Could it be the jealous teacher? I think so...Buahahahahaha...Blech...Stomach flu's suck... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Trust me, I was in a daze...It was actually really weird...you get this feeling like you're not awake and it's like a dream or somthing...Almost like your watching a movie or looking at life through someone else's eyes...It was a really weird feeling...Extremely wierd... |
![]() ![]() ![]() *coos* the perfect couple! hehe. yeah well, language is slightly better. Don't blame your bro, it doesn't help (spoken from 1 who knows). Your language is still a tad bit plain, much better than most, but it wouldn't get you published. Keep a thesauraus handy. Lengthen out your chapters. |
![]() ![]() ![]() hey, love the story, can't wait to read more. Angel |
![]() ![]() ![]() omg...u should of continued this chapter some more...it was good |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good chapter! Ardan needs to make sure that Caitlin doesn't leave him! Update soon! : ) |
![]() ![]() ![]() cackles evilly...lol awsome story to bad it isn't rated M hmm... anyways that was again awsome and now she hates him a little bit less but probably not right now if she decides to be pigheaded and scream yell and whine like a b*tchy grl hopefully it'll just be a subject they just wont talk about. ANYWAYS i hope you update soon i wish u luck on your writing! |
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