Reviews for The Beast in the Library |
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![]() ![]() ![]() hehehe, the mirror's funny. I love this chapter! It's completely brilliant. _ Whe, I'm so happy now! I still have no idea what Derrik's plotting...out of curiosity, and I guess you won't answer this, but I'm curious-is he more like a Gaston character or is Josh? ...but it can't be Josh because he's over-protective, yes, but we like him. He cares! But Derrik...he's EVIL! Hot Stuff, no questions asked, but EVIL! BUAH! ...yeah...so, um...yay for updates! You're amazing, you know that? THANK YOU FOR UPDATING! |
![]() ![]() ![]() *Scream* Aw! This chapter was so umm...cute? I don't know. Maybe It was supposed to be a bit more *cough* perverted than cute. But ah well, I thought this was adorable. NO NO NO!I don't want too much angst. I love angst, but when there is too much, I cry. And I definitly don't want a runny nose and red eyes and a throbbing head, thank you very much. I mean, I was a complete wreck after Addicted To You's sad ending (which was changed into a happy ending)So...anyways...Update or feel the wrath of my little dog. Who will just bark...and bark..and bark till you go mental. But he's cute so hey, I ...*SCREAM* I LOVE ARDAN!Much love and apple pie,Avey |
![]() ![]() ![]() DOUBLE THE ANGST! :D...god, I'm sadistic... Fab job so far and update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Its flowing purfect! This is the true beauty and the beast.. Just not in a disney [child safe] whole stuff with him grinning made me grin. Cool update. ] |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is great! I really enjoyed reading all 15 chapters. Very entertaining. Will there be DerrickXCaitlin? I hope so! Darn Josh is going to get in the way! This is very unique, I absolutely adore this fiction. Update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() well firstly i must say that i absolutely lurve the title of this chapter. lovely. and the chapter itself, of course. hm things are getting soon please |
![]() ![]() hahaha i love you kitty, you're so funnydamn those boys and their "problems" huh. i kind of like it the way its going right now, that certainly was...amusing tehe, so qhen's the wedding? j/kAMOR |
![]() ![]() ![]() Update sooner next time.. i love this story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() lol that was funny...Good job! And update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Intriguing start. I'll be back to read through the rest- so much to catch up on! A few typos. . . I think you said 'descent' instead of 'decent,' but that's just being picky, isn't it? (I hate that spellcheck doesn't catch that sort of thing!)Anyway, great start! : D |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm already in love with your story! I'm glad I've come in now instead of earlier when you took that break -wags finger- I would have most likely slapped you with a stinky fish..ANYWAY, I think this is brilliant! Personally, beauty and the beast is one of my fav. disney movies. You better update again soon! I can't wait! Keep up the good work dearie! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Okay, first of all, DESCRIBE THE AREA! We are not all you, so we don't see everything you do when you write a story. Second, didn't the guy start out ugly as hell in the begining of The Beauty and The Beast? Third, become friendly with the spacebar when you write out your titles. dancingintheshadows is harder to read than Dancing in the Shadows. |
![]() ![]() ![]() YAY! an update :) im slightly confused, but I'm ALWAYS slightly confused :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() lol i understand what you mean but it's realistic and plus it's harder for her to realize that when in her mind set she thinks that he thinks that she just a "thing" and just someone to break the spell she feels used and she had to deal with the stuff about her parents and leaving everything behind. well awsome chpt. i hope you update soon i wish u luck on your writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() woah, really short chapter. can't wait for the next update :) |