mwahahaha could the mysterious blonde-haired, grey-eyed man be derrick making a valiant return to the plot of the story? hmm we shall see i suppose

No Josh don't stray from the light! Derrick's the guy in the mirror right? This story is cool, but I don't know all of the characters seem to be a bit bipolar... Maybe I'm imagining it?

I think its Derrick in the mirror! I don't want Derrick to be evil though! : ( But I'm really enjoying your story so far! Update soon! : )

Yipes! and here we have the evilness..blah. Hehe, but yay for the update! (as always)Queue my little happy dance! CHA-CHA-CHA! haha. Yeah, that makes more sense, putting the reaction with his character. The whole confusion thing. Yah, this story is amazing even as is! I bet it'll be spifftastic later. -_- Oy, I can't wait! And I'm really excited to see what happens next!

Happy post-St. Patrick's Day!

dun dun dun.. who is this mysterious man? I'm scarred.

Poor Josh...He's so worried about Caitlin...

Is the man in the mirror Derrick? I don't know wut he wants Josh to do...probably something..evil? or...Oh I don't know. lol Good job!

Well..it matters who he's getting lusty-like over...*cough*Caitlin*cough* Oh, yeah...BAD JOSH BAD! *takes out floatie noodle and whacks him repeatedly over head* And...YAY! you updated ! update or no reviews from me!-Avey

] I loved it! Ardan is just as great.

I hope Josh isnt going to do something rash.

I don't like this mirror guy. He should shove it and leave retard Josh alone in misery

Hahahaha - yay, you've put another chapter up!

I don't actually know what that laugh was, I was laughing out loud, so I thought I'd type it too. That's always fun. (Cept when it frightens people. SOmetimes I have to be careful about what people know that goes on in my head.)

Anyway! Yay, you updated!

"making his heart swell further" I love that. Lovely description.

Ooh, it's ... it's ... creepy flirty guy! What's his name... Derrick! (I just looked back through your chapter titles - they're HILARIOUSLY FUNNY. I'm not high, promise. Just giggly.)

"The words were drawled out, the sleek words of a cat cunning enough to teach itself how to speak." Oh, interesting description. You've really catified the description - is this a hint at something?

HOw are you going to resolve the whole Josh vs Ardan thing? I'm intrigued!

I'm so happy you updated! You have to keep your promise now, and update by monday. Otherwise I may have to get violent.

Ooh shiny objects! *Gazes* I love shiny things.

Ooh, hehe, just read your author's note...*giggles* You want me to update? Hmm... I'll think about it.

Oh, I find Ardan's ardan-ness incredibly endearing. He wouldn't be so much fun if he wasn't ... ardan...

That's a very stupid sentence. I hope you understand it.

Need ... more ... ardan... I'm addicted... *peeks to see if author is convinced*

I really am! NOW UPDATE SOON!

Yep, you're right it IS a very short chapter :D. But I don't really mind...at least you updated...right? Anyways, Josh has feelings for Caitlin? Ooh!

Hm creepy dude in mirror reminding me of Snow White..."Mirror, mirror, on the wall, who's the fairest of them all?" "Why, you are, Joshypoo!" ...Okay, maybe not. Anyways, scary suspenseyness.

YAY! omg, amazing darling, just amazing... PLS UPDATE SON :) ! Lurves your writing style hun :D

Heya! btw, Beauty and the Beast happens to be my favorite movie (of the disney movies atleast) and I love your version of it! There are so many things I have enjoyed in reading this! I think I liked Belle more than the other disney heroines because she was more like me.

Love the rain! Love the darkness! And the good reading material of Dante! anyway, I'll be waiting patiently for your next update.

DANTE! D And this Ardan guy just oozes mystery. I'd like to get to know him better. Soon as I have the time I'll try to read more of this. It's gotten my attention so far.

Awkward Sylence

(by the way, I finally updated Ink & Gold, in case you're still interested.)