Reviews for Awakened from Innocence
sunday night sky chapter 1 . 11/13/2005
i like this, it sounds like a childrens rhyme, but the first line 'tear-drops' casts a different light on it. the rhythm feels like children playing hopscotch. 'Scotch-hops' could mean you say it differently to me/ got confused, or (and i would like to think it is this one) a deeper interpretation of how a childs life will be flipped over and moved around when they discover real life, adolescence and the bad things that happen in the world. anyway, good work