Reviews for SERUM
indra988 chapter 5 . 4/21/2012
This whole story, or rather, all five stories, are totally amazing. I absolutely loved it!
kazoua chapter 5 . 8/29/2008
SADNESS! Sadness is just bursting and growing and being and existing and oh my god... This is just so sad. All the story, in their own little way, had pieces of sadness in them. But this last one. That just, simply, absolutely, completely topped the cake.
Taras chapter 5 . 5/26/2006
I rarely review for heart-tug stories, but this one was too good. Maion's choice and his thoughts were so sad... I'm sorry, I can't make this into a good review because I can't get the story out of my mind. Other than a few spelling errors, it was well-written and, overall, perfect. I'll be sure to read your other stories purely because of this one.
False Alarm chapter 5 . 5/21/2006
This was absolutely beautiful. Your writing style is enviably intriguing, if that makes much sense. Every character of this story stands out from the rest of them. Good job with that, I always seem to have problems with character design.. .

I liked every one of their stories. Some of them were really sad and it seemed that they all got shot down in one way or another. Although Raphael got his happy ending . I wish it would have been Elijah, though. He stole my heart completely. Maion got a bit of it, too, for being so lovable despite having so negative attitude towards love. I loved the way his story ended.

All in all it was really good and well written although there were some minor mistakes here and there. I believe most of them are just due to carelessness. A quick proofread should do miracles to get rid of them, although they are not that disturbing really, I hardly noticed any of them. (And this was just because I'm a bloody perfectionist :D). Actually I don't believe I'm the right person to point this out to you, doing the exactly same (and more) mistakes myself .

Anyway, I adore this story and thus I'm adding this to my favourites .
S.S. Dailey chapter 5 . 4/19/2006
Wow. Very interesting story. I like the character names. They are very unique. You gave enough details for it to be good but not so many that people would be grossed out (like Annie Proulx's Brokeback Mountain. There were way too many details in that). Anyway, I rather enjoyed reading this. Keep writing.

S.S. Dailey
Luci-chan's Lunchbox Of Doom chapter 5 . 4/18/2006
Hey! I told all of my reviewers that I would return the favour and this story is the one that just reached out and grabbed me (although I'll probably read the rest after this) and I'm so glad I read it. It was excellent.

My favourite was Maion's story but they were all beautifully written. I have a little trouble stringing all of the characters together, but that's probably not your fault so don't worry. It's probably because of the pain pills (I just got my teeth pulled).

I can't wait to read more from you. You're really talented from what I can tell.

Luvs and X-Rated Thoughts- Luci-chan
disease chapter 5 . 12/31/2005
Your one hell of a writer, well done on this

Your disease
Jenn chapter 5 . 12/19/2005
I really enjoyed reading this. _ I've read some other things on the lj community brokenboys, and I noticed a certain style of yours that's marked with this type of calm quality, but when it gets into the more non-usual situations, it mixes well with the whole thing.. I hope you get what I'm talking about ;; The characters are great, the way you deliver their stories, one in every chapter, then stopped it suddenly O_O It creates a type of intrigue to what happens and why it happened.. and right now I feel some hole in heart for Maion. :)
Nekay chapter 5 . 12/16/2005
I loved the story, though I wish they were happy together and that all of them are happly in love, but the stoyies where very sad at the end. I think also more of the sex would be happy! Even if its nc-17, it should be more of the graphic inbetween. If there is an endding I hope its happy living together and finding the one they love. It is a great story and would be a good manga too if it had more sex in it please review love the story!
Miss Kit chapter 5 . 12/15/2005
Wonderful, dear. I hope to see more sometime soon.

KT
chibi suppi chapter 5 . 12/11/2005
I found this through LJ... and ZOMG! HE LEFT! HE FUCKING LEFT! Okay I'm good now but zomg I loved this please I want the real version!

suppi
Aikida chapter 3 . 12/11/2005
For chapter three, lovey, I'm going to suggest enhancing the ENDING! It jsut stops. I mean, I know I said it before, but it really just ends right there without much warning. Just ends. I would suggest elaborating on how he 'felt' lost. Confused or something. Just my opinion. Nice jobberies!

Tofu
Bra-Two chapter 5 . 12/4/2005
woa! I know you'd said there's only going to be 5 chapters but you really can't leave it there! Maion can't leave! *explodes* maybe you could go through SERUM again? make it 10 chapters *really loves this story*

ps. thanks for the reviews
Edwit chapter 5 . 11/19/2005
...Wow. That was... Kind of sad. But really good. I liked the way Maion left, how he just left, and didn't think about it. Ueriel was a bit of an asshole, but it just added to character. This was great, I really liked it.

-Robin

P.S.- I just wanted to tell you, chapter three loaded incomplete or something... It just stops! Yeah... Please look into it... I want to know about Raphael.
Kurosaki Towa chapter 5 . 11/16/2005
OMG! That was so cute! Everyone's story was so sad! I loved it!