Reviews for The unexpected
bittersweet suicide chapter 1 . 8/9/2006
This was sad. I liked your rhyming patter though. great job
Nyghtraven chapter 1 . 12/28/2005
This is a very moving poem. You captured the emotions so well. It was sad, but I didn't cry. I don't cry often. Keep up the good work, this is going on my favorites list.
Affinity chapter 1 . 12/21/2005
I added this to my favorites. It's such a moving story and so well written. Beautiful and tragic.
oohaysemag2001 chapter 1 . 12/18/2005
This is so sad and yet so loving. Children are blessing and when we lose one the pain never really go away. The void will never be filled.

Keep up the good work you have capture the true feeling of a mother who has lost her child.

TTFN Poem Critic
Written In Stone chapter 1 . 11/15/2005
That got me crying so bad. It's a very depressing supject yet you expressed it so wonderfully. Awesome work.
xoxoMizzatxoxo chapter 1 . 11/13/2005 sad. I am so sorry.
Kriss-C chapter 1 . 11/13/2005
That was so good! But so sad it makes me want to curl up and cry... great poem...
sunday night sky chapter 1 . 11/13/2005
that is so sad (