Reviews for Be Quiet
Sama-T chapter 1 . 3/18/2006
Holy cow you had me going in the begining it seemed like this kid was tortured or being murdered or something along that line great descriptions in the begining and great imagery and then you add the funny twist on the end great job _

t.j.
L e i g h chapter 1 . 11/28/2005
O. Kinda .
FlamingDoritos chapter 1 . 11/27/2005
Hehe... I laughed at the end of that... great job! I love this!
EmbersAblaze-IgnitedIcicle chapter 1 . 11/21/2005
This is spellbinding, and I found this as I was considering a joking summary of a post as "shut up".

The wildest part of this was that, it seemed as if the end would've been: 'he was killed but he was quiet'.
Lellida chapter 1 . 11/16/2005
That is so twisted! O my god- the descriptions in the beginning were amazing and brought to mind a torture chamber or something, but they completely made sense at the end too. Wow, such a twisted deep story in a little over 500 words. So cool.
Enter UserID or PenName chapter 1 . 11/13/2005
okay that was odd at first I thought they were murdering him that was good it scared me at first.
delicate-death chapter 1 . 11/13/2005
Very intresting. I didn't except that to be the reason for crying. I think it was good.