|Reviews for Queen of my latent passion|
| Faye Coon chapter 1 . 9/11/2009
Im really excited about this poem too! i havent read any of your stuff in ages. and i guess its so old by now you mightnot want the credit for it. theres not so much angsty intensity, and yea i know how that is. i keep trying to go back to the written word and i get tripped by something
and i tumble over the less gifted youth...
DOsnt it feel like back when we were younger the poets were more impressive and skilled? why is that? lets go deeper...
| ed-misery chapter 1 . 12/10/2005
really like it...love the way you write...hope to see more...cu
| AllyCred chapter 1 . 11/19/2005
i love it the descriptions are fabulous, well done, especially love the last line, its amazing.
lots of loveAC
| Broken doll on a dirty shelf chapter 1 . 11/14/2005
Yeah, it does sound like my trashy little slut doesn't it? XD Too fun! But wow, I feel so...honored in a dirty way! XD This was fantastic though! - I'm adding you to my shelf...and I shall update Ikiningyou for you! Oh thanks Love, this was spectacular!
HarlequinPlease fix me...
| kid in the closet chapter 1 . 11/13/2005
e! you did do a superb job! and it does remind me of mirage! it's brilliant!
| eighteen hundred chapter 1 . 11/13/2005
I think this is pretty good. A few of the lines seemed a bit too spelled out, you didn't give the reader enough credit, but it was still nicely done. Good work.
| hey maria chapter 1 . 11/13/2005
Love your descriptions in this: "Cigarette butts, candles of our parody/Needles, exhausted ecstasy telling the floor our secrets" and "Ripped fishnets tell the story of an eternity," just beautiful. Great job.