I like the story but the ending really felt like you let the balloon of great buildup just deflate, I get that it's partially a true story but it really could have used more effort (the epilogue).

That was quite...unexpected. But at least it was a semi-happy ending. I loved your story. Seriously loved it.

That portion at the end...I have no words. So beautiful. If you made that up, you have awesome poetic skills.

Wow. So much to say, and not enough word to say it in. It is a very, very sad tale. I felt like crying for the first three chapters. It should have had more reviews, I'm not sure why it went by so unnoticed. Maybe because it was all posted in one doing.

Wow, cool story! I really liked it and all but Somehow I feel that you've rushed it towards the ending a little. Is this the end of the story?

Wow...I'm glad I stumbled into your story. This first chapter really sets the mood and has definitely perked my interest in Kris' character. I'll give my full review when I finish the rest of the chapters.

I really like your story so far.