Reviews for The Window
Mao Chen chapter 1 . 11/15/2005
I, too, like the beginning of the story. nothing grabs me like cold imagery. i also like how you have the window's "responses"...
Spare Change chapter 1 . 11/14/2005
Intense. I like the imagery at the beginning of the story. And the ending is something else. Short, abrupt endings like that make me scroll back up to the beginning in an attempt to analyze the meaning of the story... hehe! Great job on this one, I must say. :)
ronshaberry chapter 1 . 11/13/2005
Why does this seem so familiar? WHY? WHY? Eh, it's probably the first line. About fogging it with childish accusation. I KNOW I'VE READ THAT SOMEWHERE! Anyway, beautiful and tragical and angsty and all that morbid fluff. *_*x Hehe. I love it.