Reviews for Everybody Bleeds, Even You
jennedy chapter 1 . 9/27/2009
You said in your summary that this was an "angry" song, and I see that, but to me this song speaks more of bitterness and vengeance than anger. Maybe it's just me. I loved the song anyway, keep on writing!
SayIt'sWrong chapter 1 . 11/29/2005
Great song, powerful lyrics. I like this a lot, well done. QueenVixta
SliversofSilverPain chapter 1 . 11/22/2005
indeed i can. well written to be able to tell that, but you give it away with the title. still a bluidy good poem
Ecryptic chapter 1 . 11/19/2005
Very good. I say you keep on getting better with each song posted. I can feel your emotions through this song.
Sweet Persephone chapter 1 . 11/15/2005
Thanks for the review. I love this, very cool.

"I’m a shadow puppet of despair"

Favorite line.
Plinky chapter 1 . 11/15/2005
Nice song - very angsty, lol.

"I’m a shadow puppet of despair" My favourite line ;-D

Nice song, I like, as always! Keep writing!
Element-of-Darkness chapter 1 . 11/14/2005
Well done, Master!

One of these days.. we should get together and record these songs _
undepressed-one44 chapter 1 . 11/14/2005
Whoah...this is really incredible..."I’m a shadow puppet of despair" I love that line...but I'm sowwy about what happened to you :(

-freak from the corner
WiltingBlackRose chapter 1 . 11/14/2005
I love the poem, it is very good, but I hate that you are upset.
shiva the destroyess chapter 1 . 11/14/2005
o..i like this one...very passionate...
HauntedMisery chapter 1 . 11/14/2005
I love this, very beautiful, excellent work