This is a great story. I hope more assassins come up. Please update.

Hey Snow! man, you switched to AOL and I dun know yur SN! .it says where the author of so many you only see the ones you recently worked on or HOO! I'm glad you continued this hey, if you been doing it for awhile.:-P to you.I wasn't able to get on here fer awhile.;

o.o 'Tis a cruel, cruel thing indeed to threaten the stagnation of a story like this if one doesn't get reviews. _~ But it's a good way of getting them! It's a fascinating storyline you've got going here and I'm hanging off of that quasi-cliffhanger by my fingernails! Not to mention wondering how you're going to tie the prologue in with this. You've left hints but there's no guarentee of reading those correctly... This is only the second story of yours I've read but it's also the second I've left a review for. The first was added to my favorite stories, this one got you added to my favorite authors. Anyone who writes originals this good have my utmost respect. Wonderful balancing of dialogue and action, it's such a rare skill! I love the flavor you've added to this story. It *feels* right for the period you're writing in! _ This is getting to be a huge review, hope you don't mind. I beg of you, please keep writing!

Hi. cut here. You simply have to continue this story! It's good, though Grea reminds me of someone... _ Keep writing, k?

I LLLOOOVVVEEEE Assasian storys! If you look at my name you've probably noticed...please write more!

Good chapter. A little short, but good. It should hopefully prepare us for the next chapter and any twists it should possess!

Nice, very nice. This chapter is very event-driven and engrossing. I can't tell you how much I'm enjoying this. And I'm also sure you've got some twists later one that will surprise me even more. Please continue.

Wow. Instead of one new chapter we get two! But that's beside the point. For this chapter, I'll say you sure know what to do to keep people interested. This story's got more twists than a Twisler's pull and peel! Very good (although I personally don't like twislers!)

I love this so far! Um, there's not much more to say other than I hope you post the next part soon.

Riiight, well I'm a dork, I think it's official. Let's try this again: "DARK FALL" There we go, good Jo-san, gets a biscuit, heh. _;

Ahhhh, I love this story, have I mentioned that lately? heheh _ It's chock full of everything that makes up Kenshin-y goodness except that it doesn't have the characters saving some helpless chick every five minutes, heh. The characters in this rock, can't wait to find out what happens (cause you won't tell me ya rat! hehe). Oh, and I meant to call it "Nightfall" in the other review, I really did, heh _;

Very, very good chapter. It introduces new characters to the story. How will those characters be used? I don't know, I'll have to wait and see! And even with the viewpoint shifted, you still manage to keep the story moving. Excellent! This is indeed a terrific story, and I urge you to continue it.

Hey! I think I've actually found a story which is both interesting and written beautifully. I think I've actually found a story worthwhile to read and enjoy. Thanks! But please please please... don't stop writing. If you do, I'll be forced to cancel my own story and continue yours... hehehehe... :)

I gotta tell you, your story's really caught my interest. You've already had a twist in the story concerning the identity of Grea, and the way you do it is simply superb. You're a very talented storyteller, and I'm sure you have more surprises that will peak my interest even higher. Please continue, I'm enjoying this tale very much.

right to the point and easy to read! great story!