| Reviews for Dark Fall - The Assassin |
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   Li Kayun chapter 1 . 2/20/2001 amazing medieval type of story...i spelled medieval wrong..i know...very interesting, i'll go read the next part now! |
| Light chapter 1 . 2/20/2001 Wow, this is really good. Keep up the good work. I've never really read anything of historical fiction before except for a book called "Haunted Mesa" by Louis Lamour. It was incredible, but this...wow! :) I hope to read more. You are very good at imagery. I applaud your style. Keep goin'! :) I've got to know what happens. Light |
| Gareth chapter 1 . 2/20/2001 From what I've read so far, I fell your story has a lot of potential. You get straight to the point without a lot of unnecessary text, and you present it in a colorful way. If you can continue to write the story in this manner without repeating anything, then I'm looking forward to it. Keep up the good work. |
| Gareth chapter 2 . 2/20/2001 From what I've read so far, I fell your story has a lot of potential. You get straight to the point without a lot of unnecessary text, and you present it in a colorful way. If you can continue to write the story in this manner without repeating anything, then I'm looking forward to it. Keep up the good work. |