|Reviews for What if?|
| a silenced revolution chapter 1 . 10/18/2008
I like the ideas behind this and the feeling evoked. However, I'd suggest you use more poetic techniques, such as metaphor/simile/rhyme/etc. I think this would give it more impact.
Again, though, I love the concept of mental independence.
| May Elizabeth chapter 1 . 10/5/2008
This is me too. Peace.
| Unknown Survivor chapter 1 . 10/1/2008
Haha. I love the attitude of this piece.
"Can't I live to my way?
I'm a little freak, so?"
That line made me laugh, but in a good way, of course. (:
| Erlkoenigin chapter 1 . 9/29/2008
Alles sehr nachvollziehbar!
Machst du selbst Musik?
| Stella Grimshaw chapter 1 . 9/28/2008
M, I like it a lot. It'd be an absolutely fantastic song, I wish I knew what the rhythm would be like. I feel as though it'd be something either extremely slow or super fast.
| WeekendFame chapter 1 . 9/27/2008
I loved the theme of this. Spoke truthful words.
| BJ Worth chapter 1 . 11/15/2005
I can hear this song with a little rock edge to it. Nice &%#$ you attitude.