Reviews for Rain and Fallen
sunday night sky chapter 1 . 11/15/2005
i like 'fallen' its very nice, short and simple, but meaningful. 'Rain' has lots of good imagery and work to you both! keep writing.
BJ Worth chapter 1 . 11/15/2005
Your poem is dark and wonderfully descriptive, especially the first line. Nice friend's poem is really effective for a six-liner. It's a nice little emotional jab. Nice write.